Don’t keep the first apple you pick.

Bring a ladder and reach higher.*

Discover what’s under the surface of the words you crafted.*

Crafting voice.

Search for what’s jarring.

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Less is more

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Finding the conflict in a perfect day*

Too much detail for a reader.

Just enough for a writer.*

Outlining Setting*

Using discovery writing for outlining*

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